Narrative writing - Future
Name: Felicity
Problems: Ethical issues - Future
BREAKING NEWS! Scientists have discovered how to make your very own designer babies, do you think this could work or could it be a complete fail. Should we be able to make your own designer babies with a machine or shouldn’t we. We are going to chat with one of the scientists who goes by the name Suzie that decided to make the designer babies. “I decided to make the designer babies company because some people can’t have children and we need to make more room in the world for more children”. “ Thanks for that Suzie thank you for watching New York at 6pm”.Dustin had watched the news and came straight over to Maddies house Dustin said “ Did you see the news?” Maddie was confused she watched the news and she was surprised.
“We need to get to the bottom of this” said Maddie angrily.
Dustin gave Maddie a nod. Dustin thought to himself why did they randomly make these designer babies with no weeks in advance to tell us. They researched designer babies and there was a video, well an ad, to advertise designer babies and it had over 1 million views! So they both decided to go to the designer baby shop and have a look. They walked to their electric car and they could see rubbish on the ground, but it wasn’t rubbish it was an advertisement for the designer babies, they had the best features anyone could have. But they weren’t real humans they were practically robots they didn’t have feelings they would just be perfect and our world is not perfect.
They got to the designer baby shop and it was filled with so many people and everybody had their ipads and tablets and phone, because they had written and drawn how they want their designer baby to look like. Maddie and Dustin had a look around the shop and there was a lot of technology involved but there was some science to it too. Both of them tried to get in the door but there was too many people. They had seen when the designer babies were done they were always being perfect and they weren’t different at all.
Dustin was walking along the footpath he was looking around at all the designer babies but he had realised that all of the real kids had gone. He told Maddie and she had to get all of the kids back but they were figuring out a way that they could get the kids back and stop this designer baby crisis. Maddie came out to get the mail and she saw that the mailman had dropped something and it was a book so she looked and it said products. She thought “products?” what does that even mean? So she had a look in the book and it said all the products that they used to make the designer babies. That book is just what she needed, she told Dustin everything and they had an idea.
They went to the designer baby shop and she showed people in line about the book and she reminded everyone about their real kids and that they are much more useful and loving, but they weren’t getting the word out to everyone. So they decided to make an advertisement why we shouldn’t have designer babies and that we needed to get the real children back. But Maddie saw that at the end of the book it said “ The children are landing at 3pm in the new town” But Maddie thought what new town? But she realized that there was a new town it was called Archville so she and Dustin went there and did the advertisement. They saw this big bubble thing and there she was, Suzie the mail lady but she was also the scientist that made designer babies. So Suzie got ready for the flight to head off but Maddie had talked to the pilot all about the designer baby crsis. Suzie explained that she wanted to take over the world. But little did she know, Dustin was recording her and posted it on youtube and people were furious.
Dustin and Maddie saved the Children and got rid of the designer baby crisis and finally everything was back to normal everybody had their kids back. Dustin and Maddie were sitting down and they switched on the t.v. They heard “ Thanks to Maddie and Dustin all of us have been saved” They were so happy to reach out to everyone and the world to be happy again.
Thank you for reading my story :)
Have you done a narrative before?
Hi Felicity,
ReplyDeleteThe introduction of your blog post was really clear. It is great to hear that you really enjoyed writing your narrative. Next time it would be great if you could check the formatting of your blog post so that the words do not go off the edge. You can do this by pressing Ctrl + shift + V when you paste your writing across.
I have written lots of narratives before when I was at school. I used to love writing and wanted to be an author but only write for my teaching job now. Is narrative writing your favourite type of writing?
Miss Powick