Hi guys welcome back to my blog , today I'll be talking to you about my story. This story was for one of my writing workshops at school. We had ten seconds to get out of the building and think of a story and me and my friend Mereana made this story together hope you like it.
Life at war
We had ten seconds to evacuate the military building and go fight for our country. Oh no they are going to throw a humongous bomb. GET DOWN GET DOWN HURRY BOOM!!!!!!! The bomb had gone off. People were weak people were dead but thank goodness me and my friend were
still alive. But I looked beside me and saw my best friend and I looked down and saw that her leg was stuck under a piece of wood that was from a canoe, so I helped her but her leg was bleeding and it wouldn’t stop, we surrendered but they kept on shooting so all we could do was carry on. The war ended and I carried my friend over to the military hospital and we had to chop her leg off. But we knew that the people shooting would come again and destroy our country.
I hope this inspires you to do something like this story one day.💖
really cool blog post it's awesome!!!!
ReplyDeleteFelicity this is an awesome blog and I love this story It's amazing
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting story Felicity. Mum/Maureen
ReplyDeleteI love your story it is so exciting and makes you want to read more. Your writing gets right to the point and makes people want to read from the start.
ReplyDeleteHow long did this take your to write?